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Space Egg's avatar

Thanks I hate it

(To be clear it’s very good)

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Rohan Ghostwind's avatar

Thank you for reading, I appreciate it a lot

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Doctrix Periwinkle's avatar

Very cool, creepy, and completely believable prediction. My only minor complaint is that you have human receptionists and other company representatives who interact with the main character. Consistent with this world, I think that it’s more likely that all those positions would be AI, as well. But overall, great story!

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Rohan Ghostwind's avatar

Thanks for the feedback Doctrix, honestly I cooked up the story in a couple days so I could have refined it further — appreciate you reading it :)

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Warburton Expat's avatar

That was horrifying. And believeable. I salute you, and insist on a Butlerian Jihad NOW.

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